1/3 ..pretty decent track, got a little ahead of the beat when you were going slower, and wasnt feeling the hook! you got a decent voice, use it!

1/3 u could have left the sing out and it would have been better and the content was weak could of confused

2/3 the sounds pretty clean, but the layout of the song is a bit chaotic.

"Vote: 8" VERSES: Mix is good. Has a good variety of flows to keep interest. Dig the concept! Lyrics are interesting enough to want to have another listen.    HOOK: The raps are on point. Its put together pretty good. The "Go Time" (sorry if thats wrong) is a bit too loud and takes over.. the lala-lalala-laa-laa, sounds a little bland. A little more reverb or softer back track would set it off! Good job!

Thanks to everyone that voted and listened. It is an honor

2nd Place Winner in the Oxygen Beats Rap Contest. Watch it on YouTube. Download it on SoundCloud. Follow No Modern People. Thanks to all the voters and supporters 

Artist: No Modern People
Members: Multie, NotDonsi, Hapizzez
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Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LYEfO9WXzK8

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Beat Produced by Oxygen Beats
OXYGEN BEATS CONTEST
Beat Title: "One For The Books"

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Hapizzez (Coach Jef) resides in America’s Finest City San Diego, California. Over the last few years, he has been a high school and college water polo coach. A U.S. Navy veteran of 21 years, he continues the spirit of service through his actions, music, and faith. As a member of The SOG Crew, Hapizzez has traveled to Hickam Air Force Base, the University of Hawaii, Nashville, Arizona, and all over California. He has been interviewed by Kwon Five-Nine on Speak Life Radio in Las Vegas, Nevada while celebrating at the Latin GRAMMY’s. Hapizzez appears on The S.O.G. Crew album "Fighting 4 Love" distributed by (Thump Records/ Universal Music Group) with a song titled ‘Take Me Away’ produced by Tito Rodriguez and 'Silhouette' featuring NotDonsi.

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