Good title and despairing song - no point taking her back - the magic has gone

it's like I'm right there in the recordings place, very enjoyable tune, great piano...

Happy to be a part of this one man,  thanks for letting me take a shot at mixing a song like this - something a little on the softer side.  You play a killer piano here - perfect release date !  I know singing a tune like this is a challenge too and you really did a great job on it all.  JJ - look at me…awesome song

wow, thanks for sharing this one man - sounds like a personal glimpse into someone's old letters to a lover. nice piano accompaniment here; it inspires me to go back to a piano piece I did and maybe try adding some lyrics to it.  This is only the second thing I've commented on in like the last month or so, and glad my [hopefully] return to SoundCloud started with one of your tunes brother.   :)

Beautiful vocals and piano play. And a wonderfully diverse composition with a steady evolvement of the track. A very special treat!

A Sequel to Janne Hennie's original song entitled "Trying To Leave You."
User-254573255 – Trying-to-leave-you

A special thank you to TexMex Shaman for final mixing and mastering! https://soundcloud.com/texmex-shaman

Artwork is a painting by Margaryta Yermolayeva entitled "I Am With You Day and Night"
please view her other works at margaryta-yermolayeva.pixels.com

Title: "Trying To Keep You"

I could tell my babe
by the look that was in your eyes
the cold distant heart
that kind of vibe

ooooh oooh

We’ll cherish those days
and those nights
girl, It’s OK
I’ll be alright

I want you to be happy
in your heart

ooooh I need you

ooooh I need you

I just cant take another dayyyy….wihtout you

The bird has flown away today

I will always hold dear
to my heart
your beauty, your soul
your inner light

Like a shooting star
in the night
all I need to know girl is why?

you say you need to find out who you are…
well let me tell you…
you’re the soulmate of my dreams

I love you
look at me!
How could you do this to me
I love you
my girl

Trying to Keep You (Piano Day 2024)

Thank you for stopping by 🙂

J.J. Terrell



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