Comments
Chad Spivey
· 13yNice touch with the whistling.
A Giraffe and a Half
· 13ythis is pretty much the most beautiful little writing to one…
ethan-galis
· 13yNice playful guitar with perfect words to go along with it
Lesskol
· 13yoh whistling was such a great idea! good lob!
Sam_Pankey
· 13yNice entrance with the bass! Very effective.
Graham Garrett
· 13yThis really takes me to a nice place, beautiful guitar and g…
Johnny Vogelsang
· 13yNice!
LorenzoPerez
· 13ythe lyrical spacing is perfect!
William Carlson
· 13yThis song makes me think of waking up on a nice summer morni…
DrewGriff
· 13yVery beautiful. The song fit your poem well.










