Really cool to hear you in singer-songwriter mode with this track. Sounding great here on my home stereo.

What profound and special words, and a wonderful voice to make it perfect. Just love it. Thankyou.

Can not stop listening to this, have an old x service man here who is not easily moved but boy you did it. wow.

See what you're doing with this one and it's much skilled ... digging the chorus.

Such an emotional and powerful message ... beautifully sad,superb guitar,vocal,words..PEACE.

totally drawn/very relative/universal/soars

BREATHE IN BREATHE OUT

For you the wars were real
Sleepless nights upon the battlefield
Back home so selfishly
They complain about the price of gas and coffee
Your wife left two tours ago
From the meds you took for pain with all the alcohol

It's hard
It's hard

Unwritten Unspoken
This is the peace that is broken
Breathe in Breathe out
This is the message of sending
Breathe in Breathe out
Within without
Love
  
You see no victory
You watched your friends all get blown up or just go crazy
Back home they say we care
But they only give a damn 
When all their bank accounts go bare

It's hard
It's hard

Unwritten Unspoken
This is the peace that is broken
Breathe in Breathe out
This is the message of sending
Breathe in Breathe out
Within without  

Guitar Solo

Life’s too short to throw away
So what if nobody cares about you anyway
Just live your life and live aware
That soon enough we’ll all return to home as heirs 
To Love

Unwritten Unspoken
This is the peace that is broken
Breathe in Breathe out
This is the message of sending
Breathe in Breathe out
Within without  
Love

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