Loving the B+9; takes this sonically away from a straight 1-4-5.  That alone makes me pay attention all the way through.  I think it might an interesting experiment to see how the E sounds as an E/F#, either in the verse or as a passing tone at the end of the chorus.

I am digging that strum pattern and those down strums - lots of nice bass in it.  Wonderful melodies, and your chorus melody is such a lovely just-right rise. Nice phone demo!  Great song concept and cool take on the prompt.  This song sounds like a classic already.  Love the subtle synth in the background.

this is so f***ing interesting.  it feels like sort of a 60's folk song EXCEPT for that perpetual ethereal pad going in the background giving it this weighty, billowy, dreamy feel.  Clever as hell.

Cool to hear this more raw acoustic with some of your synth touches man. Nice vocals too. Pretty cool stripped down with that texture in the background. Nice one bro.

Particularly solid opening line! I also dig the ambient/acoustic vibe. Very cool

Living on borrowed time
Mostly yours-some of mine
Thinking ‘bout starting a revolution 
Gonna get it in-line

Ready, set, go—come on
Docket’s set-oh lord (load)!
Cock back, wham-bam: revolution
Can’t you feel it blowing in? 

Can you feel it in the wind?
Can’t you feel it, my friends!
You’re right where it all began!
Can you feel it in the wind? 

Getting Darker every day
Can’t let that news set you astray 
Tell ‘em right now, by God and country
We’re headed out this a-way 

Maybe you think it’s too soon?
Some you win, and some you lose
That time has passed now—it’s too late
Come on, let’s show ‘em the way! 

Can you feel it in the wind?
Can’t you feel it, my friends!
You’re right where it all began!
Can you feel it in the wind? :

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Can You Feel It In The Wind Acoustic Demo

Austin, TX-based electronica artist.
Minimal, chill, downtempo tech-house with 80's feel. Plus some other stuff. 
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