the chords man -omg the damn chords and their modifications are MELTING me man.  the  'move along' chorus hit me like a TON of bricks.  this one is genius - absolutely BEAUTIFUL dude.  holy shit.

Man, I find this progression to be compelling.  Listened through this twice to soak it in.  So incredibly open to take it all sorts of production/arrangement directions, but most importantly it stands with just this: your voice & the guitar.  Super catchy chorus, J.D.

Nice tune man. Think i hear some McKinney influence in there. Great chord progression. 

Dude!!! This is a great tune! I agree with Mark, the chorus kills in the best possible way. Just greatness man!

Hey JD, feeling this tune, this tuning, your voice, the sentiment.  I agree with Irish below, lots of directions it could go, great as it is "uplugged".  If this is what it means to unplug the world, I'm in.

bright, upbeat and nice ring on the guitar. your voice is smooth and pleasant and the chorussss! so sing-along-able. makes me want to drive with the windows down singing alooooong 

©2020 JD Torian

Verse 1:
Some times I feel like
Rolling along

Standing in the window
Just looking on

Somebody push’em
Baby your turn

Send me a mama’
She’s been gone too long 

Gone to long 

Chorus:
Move along
Wont you try harder 
Just Move along …  

Verse 2:
Put it down
A little while at work

Give it up
Until feels like it hurts

Get so gone it
Can’t be much worse

Love something too much  
Unplug the world 

Chorus 2:
Move along
Wont you try harder 
Just Move along …

Move Along Demo 1

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