killer matching the chord changes with the melody. I like the sort of drone bass going on (and on and on). it really works for the mood.

Bang! Big acoustic chords driving this melody through. 2 guitars? Chorus with on and on is strong.

loving the vibe of this one! awesome chords and awesome energy -- also lololol about the amazon-ing - PREACH

loving the guitar on this! Absolutely awesome!

Dude those are some meaty chords.  It's a jam!

this is is brilliant dude.  cant hear you sing hardly LOL.  BAAA HAAA HAAA!!!  your chording slays me.  now I feel a little acoustic Led Zeppelin kinda.  12 string right?  such a HUGE sprawling sound to the chords .... and you are damn inventive with it.  having said all that .... may I make a request for some digital noises from u for ol times sake?

amazing man.  that little riff at the intro that reappears in the verse REFUSES to leave my head.  this is PHENOMINAL.  so creative with chords.

Curious: did you start the song with the subject matter, or with the opening & repeated chord progression? Or neither?

Awesome song! Want to get promoted? Site in my bio<3

©2020 JD Torian
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Verse 1: 
It works until we’re done shooting
Stances premature obsession
About everything every way

Frequently buying whatever I think
Completely have all that I need

Chorus 1:
Still it goes on and on
On and on

Verse 2: 
Effort show up and then it dies
Stars are coming
Control judders at it again

Put the pen down
Favorite things seem so real
My notebook is at it again

Chorus 2:
Still it goes on and on
On and on

Will it end?

On And On and On

Austin, TX-based electronica artist.
Minimal, chill, downtempo tech-house with 80's feel. Plus some other stuff. 
I play live! DM for details.

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