this is an interesting flow yet unique, keep it up i like this

Really relate to the lyrics, been thru the struggle myself man glad to hear your music!

Good rap song. Maybe vocals should be improved in terms of mixing. It sounds some clipping in them. But good work

awesome !
 intro is just wow..
vocal cool af

wow, that's a very haunting vibe! cool hip hop. nice flow, good sense of rhythm & flow. relaxed but real voice. the pitched down vocals are pretty cool too. nice piano hook. reminds of early Mobb Deep. good production & flows.

Flow is a little choppy but I like what is being said this is some pretty solid content homie.  

How did you come up with the lyrics? Do you have a writer or did you do them yourself? I know this can be a huge burden on a lot of songwriters. Great skill to have though.

this sounds crisp. It is awesome to have this bpm with nice vibes

beat a little low i think, vocals could be more crisp.

It sounds like you're really reading. Idk what to tell you. Maybe the mic latentcy is throwing you off

VERSE1
Its been almost a half a day
Since the last ti me I got to taste
the bitterness of my decay
My Momma said its it aint
gonna end well
I told her. well
 its not going to end today

If it does end well
It means ive taken all there is to take
Because if I don’t
I wont have any color in my face
 without My pink and white restraints
I cant even face the day    
cause the pain I feel
Is way more then any man should have to take

Ive been painless
 for far to long
To return to the world 
that I escaped from

Here I am fadin 
Away because
Of the pills are gone

VERSE2

Just went and checked in
All the empty bottles
And just as I expected
Not even a small crumb

Yea ive got a fuckin problem
But who doesn’t got em
If I could solve one
With out my head throbbin'

Id probably
Get a lot fuckin farther
But it wont
Until I get another pill and pop it

And im cold
And I feel like im constantly falling
In a hole

If you or anyone you or anyone you know is suffering from addiction, here is a good resource 

http://www.recovery.org/topics/addiction-recovery-helplines/

Do to popular request I removed the autotune. I have a short soft palate so sometimes youll hear some cracking sound and its not anything I can do about it. Sadly. Sorry.

Dependency

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