I don't really like those vocals, autotune all the way and it doesn't even sound good, try fix them

@mikejamesmusic15: thank you, basicly i just used two mics at once, one seems to have a slightly higher latency which adds that chorus'ish sound to it.

The beat is chill on this. I feel like the vocals can be practiced and revised a little more. Spend time on discovering yourself as a rapper.I'm doing the same thing.

Pretty cool piece. I like the nice and simple beat. The vocals are nice, they nice a little work with the mixing the effected used is a little much at points, but mess around with it. Cool tune.

The instrumental is cool. Missing some clarity tho. The vocal production is a little off to me. I feel like a nice clean vocal would sound dope on this. Keep at it. Peace

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this is some old school real hip hop right here. What the games been missing lately. I enjoyed the flow and lyrics all the way throughout. Beat was laid back but still had the swag it needed. You brought a dope delivery with just the right energy. Good stuff.

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