Some pad synth swells would fit in great here

nice note there with the vocals. while I'm here, a general comment: Nice track overall. All parts seem equally good and clear. Good stuff :)

Except the following part it's not really "INDUSTRIAL" but it's also good!!! THX

http://youtu.be/8bcvxV1TQoM

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