k...now i kick in a door and start WAILING on harmonica

The melody evokes a drip drip that fits the theme of the track

Certainly bringing back an older sound, i like it

Excellent song. Vocals are passionate and along with the guitar set the mood of the song very well!

Nice bluessy track with an alternative touch. Good mix and production

beautiful song nice vocal mix nice rhythm guitar line

Excellent voice, love guitar style like in old movies, keep going man

This is the first song I ever wrote that I remember..from back in 1994.

Water

Verse 1
Time passes by as slowly as winter today
Too much on my mind and I can’t seem to find my way

Pre-Chorus
It’s never any fun
When you’re the only one

Chorus
You’d kill me if you could but I’m too young to die
You see right through me so I can’t run and hide
Step on a crack and I’m fading away
Okay, ooh, water

Verse 2
Prismed eyes shatter and my nerves are paralyzed with fear
Deep inside my head something snaps and then nothing’s there

Pre-Chorus
I can’t escape this pain
It’s with me every day

Chorus
You’d kill me if you could but I’m too young to die
You see right through me so I can’t run and hide.
Step on a crack and I’m fading away
Okay, ooh, water

Bridge

Verse 3
Time passes by and I spread like ash in the wind
Still life simplified and I find a way to deal with it.

Pre-Chorus
I try to wash away the pain
I’ll never be the same

Chorus
You’d kill me if you could but I’m too young to die
You see right through me so I can’t run and hide
Step on a crack and I’m fading away
Okay, ooh, water

Water

Songwriter, musician, doing what I can, with what I have, to show you how I feel.  Thanks for listening.

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