This is more recent, and better than the one I just commented on from years ago. I'd still say you could tighten up your bars a bit, learn to re-work and rephrase so that your syllable count fits. It's not frequent, a few bars here or there are just a little wordy. Definitely getting better though man, I know you mentioned in this track thinking about quitting, please don't! If this is your passion in life, pursue it until you've got nothing left. If people aren't fucking with your music it's probably not 'cause you're white just that you need a lil more improvement bro, but you'll get there. Promotion and networking helps a lot too! If you have social medias, hmu on twitter @studiouspupil I'm down to help and collab bro.  You're not a failure man, we all have room to hone our craft, and overall this track had a beautiful message, you've got that part down for sure man. just technical skills that need improvement.

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Something i made up real quick.. this is just a sample.

An Altered Haiku style rap. 

This is the full release, three verses in this style. Beat Produced by EBP Beats and mixed by J Grant Did It! 

Thank you to everyone who gave me tips on how to improve my flow and cadence, and all of my day 1's who never stopped believing in me! Much more to come guys! Much love to all of you!

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Play No Games is the debut track of producer J. Dot and lyricist Studious Pupil's team PNGB (Play No Games Boys.)

Music by J.Dot https://soundcloud.com/j-grant-did-it/tracks
Mixed and Mastered by People of the Parallel https://soundcloud.com/peopleoftheparallel/tracks
Lyrics by Studious Pupil (that's me!)

We all put a lot of time and work into this track, and we hope you all enjoy listening as much as we enjoyed making it! Thank you all so much for the continued support, this journey has been wild but is just beginning and finna get WILDER!

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Blaze And Listen

Studious Pupil and TK Green spitting that real talk 
produced by the man, the myth, the LEGEND J.Dot
mixing and mastering by TK Green and Smoke Generxtor

The Curse

Been away far too long, I’m back! New music coming soon! 

I go by JP! 
What’s up everyone, just a rapper telling his story and sharing it with all of you! Be sure to like follow and comment, new music coming soon!

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