Melodies are tight and moving, repetetive, but it works.  and I'm sure once there's some vocals in there that'll help with that too.  The mix is pretty close to perfect, everything is sitting in there and playing nice, especilly liking the change up around 2:50... Only critique would be the drums.  I feel like they could benefit from some more variety in patterns, maybe even just tweaking some velocities to "humanize" it a bit, and they (the drums still) could definately use some tweaking to give them more "punch", esp. the snare.  Oooh.. really like the simple but effective leads around 5 minutes in... All in all, pretty damn decent rought draft.  Well done, bro.  _Brady (DeadraveN)

I like it. That hypnotic synth line is so sweet. the droning, whtever it is, I'm not liking. You adding vox? Anything else?    I'm tempted to say: Hit me up on kompoz.com and let me work on it. *shrug*

dem feels. would be good with some lil wayne rapping on it

Listening to this and how it progressed to the vocal mix.... the vocal mix added seemed to change the whole arrangement!!! both takes are amazing. great work my friend :)

instrumental electronic rock ballad..meant to have a vocal line..  all instrumentation played and sequenced by John Williams..  12 tracks-25 patterns-68bpm   this song will have a vocal line soon...(please leave comments on the mix!)  thanks--enjoy! "this music speaks to my heart/soul the pain i have been through-the struggles i have faced-" J.C.W.

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