Such great sounds, Jon, and cool vocal. Lovely pic too!!!

Very nice, Jon! As if it is something out of Donald Fagen's secret notebook.

amazing Brill Building style, not easy to sing, beatiful chorus

Real stylish Jon, love that classic early 60s pop sound! real nice horn section and easy going catchy vocal melody, excellent song-writing work!!!

Very nice lyric and vocals//music, mix and production on point!

I really appreciate this nod to a classic sound so soon forgotten by most. You’ve done it proud, so well composed and performed. Tasty.

Lyrics:

I don’t want to stay here
Just
Waiting on the world
Now
Baby I’ve got ideas
For you
And I
Need to see you
Smile
Make my blood flow

Dobbie you’ve got my mind asunder
Dobbie please let me watch you slumber
Dobbie please

I can’t find my own thoughts
Like
This who I am
Well
Won’t you fill the boxes
And make
Me alive and 
Breathe out
Whisper in my ear

Dobbie you’ve got my mind asunder
Dobbie please let me watch you slumber

How could I have missed so badly
You know 
My heart’s
Your’s alone
Why would I have ever hurt you
Look close
You’ll see
The real me

I think I am done so 
Go
Make your way back home
Girl
You’ve got stuff to do and
I see
That I’ve brought you 
Down and
There is no way back

Dobbie you’ve got my mind asunder
Dobbie please let me watch you slumber

How could I have missed so badly
Oh no

Dobbie you’ve got my mind asunder
Dobbie please let me watch you slumber
Dobbie you’ve got my mind asunder
Dobbie please let me watch you slumber
Dobbie you’ve got my mind asunder
Dobbie please let me watch you slumber
Dobbie you’ve got my mind asunder
Dobbie please let me watch you slumber
Dobbie you’ve got my mind asunder

Dobbie

I'm a conceptual musical artist but the concepts are vague and I'm not willing to explain them.

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