I like how the song starts and I like the drums ..It is a rough mix, but for a rough mix it's actually really good..Guitars are sweet...I like the idea as well...Bet this is going to be a gem when done..great harmony too...

Huge guitar! Like the vocal melody line as well, you have a knack for writing catchy stuff :) You should have won the contest, btw :P

Powerful song Jon - I have VERY good ears..this mix is quite good.You wouldn't want the guitars anywhere other than where they are and the vocal is fine - maybe pan the guitars a bit more L&R and sit the vocal in the middle.FABULOUS track!! check my cloud for mixes by Chris Scheri. BRILLIANT wah solo mate!!! Peace :))

Great outro solo, man! Nice track, I actually think the vocals sound pretty good!

This is a old song from the band days but i,ve changed a few parts and i could use your feedback on this track on everything from the mix to arrangement and vocals
Thanks and enjoy
Jonathan

Shipwrecked  ( rough draft)

Hey everyone i'm currently working on 16 songs that i recorded and mixed by myself. I'm open to any suggestions or comments you might want to make. These songs are basically a rough draft. They could sound alot better in a professional studio. I Recorded and played all the instruments as well as mixed the music so it does take some time to get it sounding right. It's a work in progess. I write lots of different types of music so stay tuned. Thanks for listening.
Jonathan Watts

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