cool song, catchy and danceable, my feet itch

Dude, this is really catchy, shades of like, early modest mouse or first wave emo?? Unusually groovy, though, nice

Seconding what that dude said about the pop-punk edge, with this sort of vocal mix in the back here, which sounds GREAT, definitely a fan

The beginning reminded me if RHCP lol but overall, great song good job bud!

Kind of an up to dateJim Morrrison feel on the whole number

Sweet bassline, though it sounds a little too muddy. Throw some leads in here to add some oomph

Love the vocals and bass, and the fake drums actually work out pretty well for this. This is well done for a home demo, much better than my recordings.

Definitely impressive for a one person project! I think a real drummer would really suit you though- the drums sound pretty static throughout the song. The guitars are good, but the bass is pretty murky sounding (someone already said this, so I don't mean to beat you over the head with it). Also I would really practice your singing- you're kind of singing around the notes rather than actually hitting them dead on. If you're going for a more nonchalant singing style that's cool, but right now it just sounds off key. I hope this gets fleshed out in the studio some more, because I think with some polish this could be a great song.

bass line and vocals are really cool, and the hook is awesome!

Wrote a little ditty to get me out of this songwriter's block. Didn't turn out quite as bad as I thought it'd be!

Still has a lot of work that needs to be done on it, but I'm exhausted and I figured it was pretty decent for public viewing. Will probably come back at some later time and tweak it to perfection.

UPDATE: Added a bandcamp link, just click the "Buy" button. To download for free, just put 0.00 in the price box. You can, however, add a price for donations.

Peace, homies



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