I would say you can do a lot lot better than this bass here man. And if you're lazy I'll send you some Massive presets. :)

You know in Scary Monsters where the drums filter up from the ground? You can hear that thud of the kick and snare.. you should do that. ;)

Yeah the kick is nice and crunch, maybe a bit too toppy for my liking, but it's good that is auidable. I would work on eqing it to be more of a thud. Apparently kicks are good at about 100HZ but you probably knew that. I'm guessing there's a stack of sub on this? [I can't hear through my PC speakers] 

I would go for a cliche build up here, one the old kick drum 16th build ups, at the moment, the kick flop about and it doesn't really give a sense of direction. If you're not going to alter the kick pattern you could instead filter up some 16th snares. The regularity of that would help it have some direction.

If I'm honest, about here I had noooo idea what emphasis the beat was on, like.. I can't tell what beat the pushes are on and what's beat 1 etc.. Maybe it was because the intro was faded in, but right about now I'd have some percs and risers marking out the start of each 16 bars.

Nice little fill, a little over complicated for my liking.. but now I'm being picky. >:)

That snare needs to sound more like this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0qyq5-xcFBI&feature=related [Skip to 1:15] it's about the right sample, a bit of distortion, compression and limiting.. but you probably allready knew that. I spent about 1 hour trying to make my snare on my new tune 'Something To Loose'. It sounds not bad.. nice and phaaat.

Scrolling through all my unfinished stuff - found this. Do I continue with it?

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