Love your song is actually one of the better radio tracks that ib have heard while on here reviewing songs keep up what you ate doing and I KNOW you will go fat with what you ate trying to do.

good song concept the mix could use some work but a good song none the less 

This is a cool track im feeling the instrumental a good choice

Right on man this was pretty cool. I liked the piano smoothed beat in the back and the vocals were nicely recorded.

@jesus-delreal: i will thanks so much for your comment

rapping is good. The rythem flows over the instrumental but the vocals sort of sit on top. I would mix the vocals better but its not bad

decent lyrics, however the timing sounds off. the vocals could do with some tuning too.  maybe some effects and equalization - cut some of the lower frequencies.  i think a lo-fi effect would work real nice with this style.

Nice rhyming man, I'd love to hear a better audio recording of this!

flow is nice but something is off with the beat

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