This track is a solid starting place but needs more lyrics, shorter sections, or maybe both.

11.26.23 Uke Cottage Beach Sleep

This track feels pretty done to me as far as writing is concerned. IT needs to be recorded better and there is some room for experimenting.

11.26.23 Life Happens In Waves

I think the verse needs a better vocal melody on this one, I wrote one good melody for this nifty 5/4, 5/4, 4/4 phrase pattern but a second one eludes me.

11.26.23 Letgo

I think there is a solid vocal melody here but its still needs help. I like the phasing secondary pattern that happens in the second and third choruses.

11.26.23 Breath It In

This vocal part is a real rough draft but I think everything else gets there.

A Neon Time 11.26.23

My name is Rod and I make music as Unreliable Narrator. I am looking for new musicians to work with, preferably in Baltimore. Let me know if you like what you hear and lets work together.

jrodericklauver