First verse with some rephrasings/reharmonizations.

Be Thou My Vision (Short Arrangement)

I am giving up my inhibitions,
Second guessings, intermissions.
Time to lay me down to sleep
My soul to keep, my soul to
Keep on living through my limitations.
If the mood feels my vibration,
I should die before I wake:
My soul renewed, my soul remade

La la la la la la la la
La la la la la la la (x2)

It’s the pattern of humanity,
The matter with society,  
My scattered love for every sake:
My soul to take, my soul to
Take it, hold it, puff it out,
Bake now, wait now, exhale, pass it on
When I’m given much, I’m blessed to share
My soul enriched, my soul aware

La la la la la la la la
La la la la la la la (x2)

Bedtime prayers don’t care
Bedtime prayer, soul care
Bedtime prayer, soul care
King with no no cares

I am overflowing Yah Yah’s mercies
Seas of joy outpouring through me
Songs to ears, and light to eyes,
Soul paradise, soul pair of
Pride for humble ones in heaven’s sight,
Rings for the groom, crowns for me.
I pray to the King that when I sleep,
My soul will sing, my soul will sing

La la la la la la la la
La la la la la la la

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