Love the structure of the middle of this - the "everything starts to shake" part. Be good to hear this "finished"!

i love yours strumming grove. really works with everything else going on

This is very Matchbox Twenty in a great way (some of their less-heralded songs are some of the greatest songs I've heard on the radio, e.g. "If You're Gone"). I especially love the generosity of melody here, you've given us several hooks to enjoy.

I really love the rhythm!  The guitar rhythm and especially the vocal rhythm hooked me and kept my attention.

Wow, Kent, this is great! Solid groove, really catchy, and there’s a fullness in your voice that really ties this all together. You proved that this can hang! ;) 

Great lyrics and a strong groove that really propel things along. Very strong melodically too! Nice one!

glad you came back to this one-definitely a keeper -good one.:)

Could listen to your music all day... Words seem to get out of your head and into the songs so well...🙂🎶👏❤️from David Easterling

Great energy with the rhythm guitar - I really like the melody on "Get inside my head and pull me out"

Sure, "Prove It" was the Week 14 prompt. But I didn't finish this song then. Don't think I finished it now.

*****

It's easy to say
We'll hold everything dear
Like we do right now
When the ending is

The ending is
What we make of it
You're going to be what we need right now
Prove it
Prove it to me

Everything starts to shake
Everything starts to blur

I can barely sleep
You're  early morning dreams
You're talking half to me
And half to you

Get inside my head and pull me out
Pull my body through when it calms down

It's all coming home, if you feel that darling
Pretty lies we were ready for

I remember rain, I remember sun
It's been so long it's gonna come, it's going come
Prove it
Prove it to me

Get inside my head and pull me out
Pull my body through when it calms down

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