This might well be one of the most heartbreakingly beautiful songs I’ve heard from you, Kent. Truly, this is quite evocative... Oof, all the feels in this one.

Better than staying the same. Love this 😊

Well done my friend. I'd love to write a song with you someday...

A very effective melody, Kent. Love your vocals on this. The sparse arrangement puts the focus on your voice and I think it works well.

So glad I got my tickets before the train filled up, Sapville is stunning in the fall. I relate to the feeling of writing a string of mopey tracks, I used to write a lot of them and somehow it just changed one day.

Feeling smaller...chiping Stone from statue... Don't recognize me! Brilliant! Total song!🙂❤️🎶👏 by David Easterling

Oh I like what you did there with the rhyming "sames"

Well goshdarnit I liked this mopey song to Sapville! Really nice writing and performance. Especially enjoyed these ending lyrics working with the why where when what who motif.

wow this vocal performance may be among your best, such soul here

The train this week is leaving for sapville. All aboard!

I started with the idea of someone realizing that the "I" in "I love you" had changed while repeating that phrase over time and it kinda went full mopey from there. I really gotta write an upbeat positive tune next week - you'd think "simple and sweet" woulda been the one, but whelp, here we are.

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Don't like to think what I am leaving behind
It's easier that way
If I tell you that I'm sleeping fine
It's easier that way
I've been falling all to pieces
I've been thinking you've been doing the same
Don't like to think what I am leaving behind
But it's better than staying this same

It's all coming down

Cause I don't recognize me
I've been wondering who am I
In I love you

You've been talking about growing old
I feel smaller now every day
Chipping stone from a statue
I've been wondering what will remain

Cause I don't recognize me
I've been wondering who am I
In I love you
I don't know who loves you

We could keep things sweet and simple
But when we put it like that 
It's hard but what I'm leaving behind
Is getting hollower every day

It's not that I don't wanna stay
It's who'd be left in my place

It's all coming down

Cause I don't recognize me
I've been wondering who am I
In I love you
I don't know who loves you

I've been wondering why
I love you
I've been wondering when
I should be leaving soon, should be leaving soon
I've been wondering where
I'll be going to
I've been wondering what who I used to be would do

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