beautiful vocal and melody..awesome lyrics are so well done..140 upbeat is very emotional...very imaginative parallel : desert island/lost relationship

another well written song..beautiful vocals

Soo lovely melody and Your voice is wonderful!

A toxic relationship told from the narrative perspective of being lost on a deserted Island.

Lyrics:

Salt burns my lips to silence,
The sun with rage and violence.
The sky bleeds red
With words left unsaid.
 
Captain, you swore you'd never let go.
You vowed that we’d sail through sun and shadow.
I’m left on this shore with my heart so hollow
And I am alone,
Forever alone.

Hunger gnaws my bones
thirst cracks my skin
I drift between dreams
and darkness closing in

Captain, you promised that I’d never drown,
But this island just smiles as it pulls me down.
I trace in the sand all the maps that you drew,
But tides take the lines 
And any hope too.

Beyond the horizon, I thought I saw sails,
A promise of rescue, but faith always fails.
The waters know driftwood and battles and wars,
The sea keeps its secrets, the wind tells me yours.

Captain, you promised that I’d never starve,
But the sun burns my skin, with my lips turning hard.
I trace in the sand the maps that you drew,
But the waves wash away
the memory of you.

My soul cracks with whispers, horizon a blur,
A shadow that lingers, while you sail with her.
I’m lost to the silence, the sun, and the cold,
Captain, you left me, and now I let go.

The Island

In the Southern Hemisphere, autumn has been going for a few days. This season is characterized by everything "beginning to go down," for example, the sap in plants. This also affects people's moods, which is why I composed ¡Come On Otoño! (Come On Otoño), a way of saying, well, we're going to have a bit of a low mood, but we're going to put in the strength and attitude to overcome it... Come On Otoño!
En el hemisferio sur hace varios días que comenzó el Otoño. Esta estación del año se caracteriza en que todo “comienza a bajar”, por ejemplo la savia en las plantas. Esto también afecta el estado de ánimo de las personas, por eso compuse ¡Come On Otoño!, una manera de decir, bueno, nos toca vivir un  “bajón” de ánimo pero igual le vamos a poner fuerza y actitud y lo vamos a superar… ¡Come On Otoño!



¡Come On Otoño! -  Gustavo Camargo

https://soundcloud.com/plex-auchta - bass guitar and drums
lil' spaceman - beatbox and vocals

susie's got an uzi (ft. Plex Auchta)

If you have ever experienced helping friends or loved ones through tough times or ever had support from others when you have been struggling to deal with things, then just remember that there is always hope :) 


Hold on
Take what I have and follow me
Stay with me 
Follow my lead 

Its our time
We can be what we want if we want to be
Don’t waste it
Its something we need

Why is it hard to carry on?
Why do we find it hard
Righting any wrong
Why can’t we see what’s going on
And take it slowly 

In a new light  
You can look back in time and think differently
Stay with me  
I’ll help you to breathe

Move on
We can leave things behind that we don’t want to see
I’ll be with you
If you want me to be
 
Why is it hard to carry on?
Why do we find it hard
Righting any wrong
Why can’t we see what’s going on
And take it slowly

Why is it hard staying strong?
Why do we find it hard
When its easy being wrong
Why can’t we see what’s going on
And take it slowly

Just hold on
Take what I have and follow me
Stay with me 
Follow my lead

Hold On

sorrow

Heavy Rain

Cat fight

Doom is knockin’ by Nova J

Doom is coming (doom!)
Doom is near (doom!)
Doom is whispering
In your ear (doom!)
Doom is rising (doom!)
Doom is fate (doom!)
Doom is knocking
At the gate (doom-doom)

The world right now feels dark, deranged
The ruling power is greed and rage
Hell beings and chaos goblins in control
You look in their eyes and see no soul
(Oh-ohh, ah-eh, doom-doom)

Will darkness prevail?
Or will there be light?
Will we climb this hill
Or descend into night?
(Oh-ohh, ah-eh, doom-doom)

Empires rise (rise)
Empires fall (fall)
Just ask the Romans
They conquered it all
But the fire spread (spread)
From greed they fed (fed)
Once mighty powers
Now ruins instead
(Oh-ohh, ah-eh, doom-doom)
(Oh-ohh, ah-eh, doom-doom)

Doom is coming (doom!)
Doom is near (doom!)
Doom is whispering
In your ear (doom!)
Doom is rising (doom!)
Doom is fate (doom!)
Doom is knocking
At the gate (doom-doom)

We can battle the world
But the world always wins
There’s always a price
For our shortsighted sins
All that we think is forever is not
We could be a blip the timeline forgot
(Oh-ohh, ah-eh, doom-doom)

(Oh-ohh, ah-eh, doom-doom)
(Oh-ohh, ah-eh, doom-doom)
(Ba-da-da doom… ba-da-da doom…)

So we keep on consuming, devouring at will
Indulging our impulse for pleasure and thrill
But we must remember
And never forget
There’s a price to be paid
Someday… we can’t escape
(Oh-ohh, ah-eh, doom-doom)

Empires rise
Empires fall
Greed builds the tower
Then crumbles it all
(We never learn…)
(We never learn…)
There’s a price to be paid
Someday… we’ll burn
(Oh-ohh, ah-eh, doom-doom)
(Oh-ohh, ah-eh, doom-doom)

Doom is coming (doom!)
Doom is near (doom!)
Doom is whispering
In your ear (doom!)
Doom is rising (doom!)
Doom is fate (doom!)
Doom is knocking
At the gate (doom-doom)

(Oh-ohh, ah-eh, doom-doom)
(Oh-ohh, ah-eh, doom-doom)
(Ba-da-da doom… ba-da-da doom…)

There’s a price…
To be paid…
(Oh-ohh, ah-eh, doom-doom)

Doom is coming (doom!)
Doom is near (doom!)
Doom is whispering
In your ear (doom!)
Doom is rising (doom!)
Doom is fate (doom!)
Doom is knocking
At the gate (doom-doom)

Doom is knockin’

As the title mentions, this piece was composed on impulse.....

Art picture is by randy-lisciarelli on unsplash....

l'Impulsion

A selection of tracks created with my writing partner, Ken (now sadly departed) in the late 70s and through the 80s. All brought back to life with the benefit of modern technology

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Hi. I went to edit one word of my bio and I accidentally deleted it. Off the top of my head it said, "something something something, blah blah blah, why are you reading this? Go and listen to music!"
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