yo i think i would have the beat here lightly, maybe just hats and minimal kick/clap just introduce the groove to the listener subtly

would redo this liable to scheme line so it's more on the groove

i like the hook for the most part, but not really sold on eyy eyy whoa whoa side stuff totally, but that's just personal preference

pretty cool overall, if you did nothing else to it, it's pretty rad as is, but you've asked for honest feedback from and i hope you found it helpful. feel free to delete these comments if you'd like.

also kinda wanna hear like another instrument to compliment the melody here, whether it's a vocal harmony or some other tactful harmonizing instrument/voice to feel like the beat went somewhere

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