Can I comment on my own song? I think this song is cute :) 

Great Vocal Enjoyed it a lot! give this a listen and comment if you can! www.soundcloud.com/electricchildhouse/brothers-and-sisters

lot os spirit in this song...and you play the violin very well and the violin is great too

this is a wonderful song ! it needs more exposure . HEY SOUNDCLOUDERS  , LISTEN UP !! THIS IS GOOD !! 

BETTER

Waking up to a song
The sun fails to shine
You’re leaving tonight 
But I don’t need to decide
If you’re taking the exit…
It makes it 
Better, better, better, yeah

You’re texting a friend
As we’re saying goodbye
You are making new plans
It’s just a matter of time
I’ll be calling my friends
To make it 
Better, better, better

Hey, Hey
We could be making love tonight,
You say,
I will be waiting, waiting, waiting

Spending evenings alone
On a pile of time
Broken promises 
Bounce off bottles of wine
You are sending me smiles
To make it
Better, better, better

We are back on the phone 
But I am leaving tonight
You are asking
If I could let you back in my life
I’m beginning to think
That it’s getting
Better, better, better

Hey, Hey
We could be making love tonight,
You say,
I will be waiting, waiting, waiting…

I’m changing my mind
I wanna see you tonight
I’m begging the stars
To let you back in my life
We are making decisions
To make it better, better, better

Hey, hey
We could be making love tonight
You say,
I will be waiting, waiting, waiting

Waking up to a song
the sun fails to shine
You are leaving tonight
but I don’t need to decide
if you’re taking the exit 
It makes it better, better, better


Better

Born in the USSR.  Live in NYC. I love writing music & poetry.

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