I personally find Verse hopelessly cute when she's so drunk she can't  remember all the reasons she got drunk in the first place. Also up to about age 6, which I think is the age she is at that point.

This tune is just so good. I feel like I'm playing some 16bit game while listening to it.

I suggest you tone down the arrangements, and strip the theme down to bassline+melody+chords(maybe). Work with that, and only add more instruments when you're happy.

Newer render of a very old version of Verse's theme -- uses the same progression from a couple other songs from that era.  (See: Little Black Cat)
Since her current 'cute' theme is a complete clustermess, I'm trying out a few new ideas on what to do for a 'cute' theme for her. I don't consider this 'done', but for now, I've hit a wall.
The main thing I encounter is that thematically, although Verse -can- be a very cute person, she has done some things that aren't so cute. <_>; It's hard to reconcile all that, but I s'pose I'll keep trying. :V For now, enjoy!

Sunflower Fox V2

Composer for Star Buster, Miasma Caves, Leilani's Island, Freedom Planet 1 and 2, HardSpeed and tons more.
Freelance game composer, author and semi-professional race car driver from the west coast. I've been in the game music business for around 10 years.  I have two major projects (HardSpeed: Synthpop/80s) and Elancia (JRPG styled music.)

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