Yo, listened to your track and there some things that are not comfortable for a listener.
First, the intro. your vocals are overlapping each other, which results in a mess of sounds.
Put the background vocal in the background by turning down the volume and in addition mix, wet reverb in the background vocal.
Also, the 808/kick/main vocal are really distorted. Maybe it comes due to the addition of a multiband compression on your vocal.
You could (especially on such msg) add some autotune to the main vocal (and turn the volume up) or just the background vocal, depends how you would like it.
If you choose, not to put it on the main, then practice more to get the tunes of the beat right.
Flow & msg is good.
Keep on and have fun makin music dawg

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shiloh dynasty infused beat tape!
chilled lofi mix for cozy evenings 😌

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