Its good, I can tell you're readin and not rapping if you understand what I mean. I like the concept though.

no not freestyle it just doesnt sound fluid. thst comes with time 

the verse is dope too just work on makin it sound fluid not like reading like that dude said, dont get me wrong tho this got potential m

im diggin doe. i like ya flow an tha story ya runnin wit. ..tha chorus killin doe!

I like this we gon have to get on a track if u down

Raw Cut Of My First Actual Song recorded. 

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Hello To All I Am Leyle Marie a  Writer Rapper and Model Out Of The Minneapolis Area. You can Follow me here and on Twitter and IG at Sota_Sosa Thank You For Following. I Follow Back!!! Peace & Love

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