great job man, this vibe is great, and your bars are crispy. All I can suggest is adding a chorus with some repetitive instrumental part that matches the overall emotion - only if you want to get a more conventional rap. Otherwise, this structure is sweet in it of itself. Love your work.

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Call my Number - Apollo (Engineered by Baby Zeus)

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theres what?
like 7 billion humans on this globe?
yet
my only affiliates 
are those who is dope
when those dams 
be spilling 
will we really stay afloat 
i think fam we winning 
we just need stay awoke
wow
i think i really need to lay back 
not feeling great its just 
an impulse that i say that
yo
but I’m happy if you indulge in my lame rap

lord willing let them hunnys come, maybe stay and crash 

kinda wishing i had hundreds in abundance 
cause with money man its sad but homie you can slay ass

where the fucking stage at
 bring the ruckus 
asap 

umm
contemplating 
how i used to live in ignorance 
ha
not complaining honestly i kinda miss the shit 
now a days is often just case of hit or miss 
so its to this haze i stick, 
and its ridiculous 
ugh
when I’m faded 
my music making meticulous 
more debating 
like move it
then make it different kid
now I’m replacing 
and using 
some different emphasis 
its the beat mason 
hes forging 
a mace with elegance 
here to reap, take in and
weigh in on all the benefits 
bringing heat rays in 
 i'm raising up all 
them stakes bitch 
over twenty celsius 
melting of all of my enemies 
smelt into this synergy
hell hounds ready G
spells now heavy if you envy me
only reciprocate 
the vibes 
you bringing into the light 
 i incinerate with rhymes
you reiterate whats trite
aristocrat never struggled for a day in his life 
ay mista white 
think that you can share the recipe for life?
not talking crack or even meth I’m talking messages
ight
no need for that vicodin I’m funky fresh no sedatives 
yeah
you funny pests
repetitive  
go lolligag yourself 
son I’m menacing 
you stumble to wealth 
while i fell to
enlightenment
i struggled to tell 
because you just keep fighting it 

pressurrr (prod. by Don Papa 海賊)

data.corrupted [prod. fausuto]

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x
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aruma. X Buddha - blckmatter

@hujili with the bars

check it
on an expedition to some ancient 
remnants
everest 
to rome 
silk road
slick penmanship

everywhere we go
in
this globe is so excellent 
the evidence is shown thru my flows 
and benevolence 
ugh

on a special mission to some lost
settlements
i
spark up the kettle 
then 
we cooking with perfection its

real
life no time for being pessimistic 
if it feels right 
well
then fuck em
homie
neva give in

me and my brothers chilling 
uncovering rubble rumplestiltskin 
get filled in 
like coffins down under 
in an innocuous slumber 
for the hot as shit summer

couple sub saharan 
cats,
tearing at one another 
see some ocelots who fought a lot 
but are
very good lovers 
guess perception 
isn’t always what it seems 
hujili mutters 
hah
third person 
now
we moving thru the motherland 
everythings connected to the earth 
you should understand

stand the test of time 
on deck 
in this sailboat

they’ll know 
I’m the best at rhyming 
with no tailcoat

hell no 
approach the horizon 
and see the whales float

to no avail 
lighting up 
with some stale dope

an
Obsidian obelisk 
ominously 
In the mist 
i slither up cautiously 
its thought to be a deep pit 
full of many oddities 
probably worth a steep bid
so my curiosity 
guides me thru the seepage 
we
seeking 
omnipotence
thru darkness we keep lit 
walking up on 
art thats carved with don’t read this

yo 
lungs fulla tar heavy breathing

hopping on my nimbus 
stand tall like the pyramids 
im popping out these rhythms so swiftly 
like a cheetah bitch 
toking on a spliff 
while we roaming to roman territory 
in the air recording 
these vocals without a pair of cords 
and apparently 
keeping it local
no air ports

Worldwide (Ft. hujili)

that new from the gods themselves courtesy of [lofi.raps]

vocals and horns ung god @nyodus
barrs barrrs barrrrs from @kimbalang
slaps and shit from @tenderleafygreens

cover by old god

ny odus x Kimba Lang - Put It In The Brain [prod. TenderLeafyGreens]

Sura - Mostly Written (Prod. B. Young)

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