Well done..Unique voice..great lyrics..enjoyed it.

Quite fragile melody and well-driving beats

Heartfelt, soulfull vocals and musically sophisticated

from the first beat this song grabbed me 💜 love it, well done

Tongue & Strings 6

(translation above)

Chanson écrite dans le cadre des ateliers d'écriture de Claude Lemesle, immense parolier français, avec pour : 
1er thème : clavier neuf et vieux cahier
2e thème : Mme Mangouste et M. Cobra

Mots imposés : de 1 à 5 syllabes
Gel (ou gèle) – Gilet – Cléopâtre – wagon-citerne - archéoptéryx

Song written in the framework of the writing workshops of Claude Lemesle, huge French lyricist, with for 1st theme : new keyboard and old notebook
2nd theme : Mrs Mongoose and Mr Cobra

Mandatory words : from 1 to 5 syllables
Gel (or freeze) - Gilet - Cleopatra - tank car - archaeopteryx

La Myope et la Beauté

Un jour que je spleenais dans un train sans saveur,
Je vis, sur un des sièges, un vieux cahier laissé
Peut-être par un scribe en ce siècle égaré ;
Et ce wagon si terne a repris des couleurs.

Voici donc, sans mentir, ce qui était écrit :
La reine Cléopâtre avait une mangouste
Comme unique animal de douce compagnie
Plus chaude, s’il en est, qu’une froide langouste.

Mais Madame Mangouste, hormis d’être une flèche,
Beaucoup plus qu’une taupe, était tout à fait myope.
Dédaignant les lunettes, elle était sur la brèche
Comme va le montrer cette suite interlope.

À travers ses faux cils, la reine un soir contait 
La passionnante vie des archéoptéryx
Au petit Césarion qui, de loin, préférait
À ces récits barbants, les BD d’Astérix.

Mais c’était sans compter sa mangouste bigleuse
Qui confondit le haut de son royal diadème
Avec un vrai cobra d’une âme belliqueuse
À la gueule affamée comme après un carême !

Son grand cœur sur la patte, il fallait la sauver.
Agile, elle sauta, mais glissa sur le gel
Dont dame Cléopâtre à l’excès tartinait
Ses longs cheveux bouclés pour rester toujours belle.

Le mortifère croc mordit le cou d’albâtre
D’où, sur le marbre froid, tout le sang a gilé .
C’est ainsi que mourut la belle Cléopâtre
Par cause de myopie et d’excès de beauté.

J’ai voulu, en hommage au scribe sans délai,
Dans cette page où mon clavier neuf a serti
La copie rapportée dans ces quelques couplets
Offrir la vérité d’une histoire inouïe.

Myckaël Marcovic, le 10 décembre 2021

The Myopic and the Beauty

One day I was spleen in a train without flavor,
I saw, on one of the seats, an old notebook left
Perhaps by a scribe in this lost century;
And this so dull car took again colors.

Here then, without lying, was what was written:
Queen Cleopatra had a mongoose
As the only animal of sweet company
Hotter, if it is, than a cold lobster.

But Mrs. Mongoose, apart from being an arrow,
Much more than a mole, was quite short-sighted.
Disdaining glasses, she was on the alert
As this interloping suite will show.

Through her false eyelashes, the queen one evening told 
The fascinating life of the archaeopteryx
To little Caesarion who, by far, preferred
Asterix comics to these boring tales.

But it was without counting his mongoose
Who mistook the top of his royal tiara
With a real cobra of a warlike soul
With a mouth as hungry as after Lent!

Her big heart on her paw, it was necessary to save her.
Agile, she jumped, but slipped on the gel
With which Lady Cleopatra spread her long curly hair
Her long curly hair to remain always beautiful.

The deadly fang bit the alabaster neck
From which, on the cold marble, all the blood gelled.
It is thus that died the beautiful Cleopatra
Because of myopia and excess of beauty.

I wanted, in homage to the scribe without delay,
In this page where my new keyboard has set
The copy reported in these few verses
To offer the truth of an unheard story.

Myckaël Marcovic, December 10, 2021

La Myope et la Beauté

Lyrics:

Numbly counting days
Trapped inside this role
Ropes on tired hands
A step away from fall

Clinging to the unknown
In the fight with the time
The familiar call of the apathy

Stop! Stop! -
Trying but failing

Stretched to nigh being torn
In the hands of the lies
And fiction envious of this reality 

Hold on
To all that's remaining

Rise!
Pain of being awake
Is no excuse for the lies
Can't just keep closing your
Eyes
We're far from the end
Still dormant in this denial

Favor roll of the dice
And trust the loudest of all!
Incessant screams of the crowd drown the reason

Wake up!
Illusions will fall

Tales promoting the lies
While fooled submissively wait
For fading halo to light up their hero

Shut up!
Delusions is all you know!

Rise!
Pain of being awake
Is no excuse for the lies
Can't just keep closing your
Eyes
We're far from the end
Still dormant in this denial

Desperate run towards this brittle peace of mind
Anxiety devoured from within
Eyes down...
I'll wait it out
This time...

Denial

When you’ve lost your place
Spinning around in space
And all stands still
And you’ve searched the past
Did it slip away too fast
The time to kill
Is it all just fake
How much can you take
What’s this all for
Hard to face today
Has to be a better way
Is there something more

Always where you want to be (when it comes creeping in)
It means everything it’s everything tonight
Show me what you need to feel
You mean everything you’re everything tonight

If you see past the charms
You’ll find open arms
To lead you here
Find another way
Cast above the gray
Relieve your fears
Don’t look back again
Stand out in the rain
To cleanse your soul
Nights to long to roam
I’ll light your way back home
Reclaim control 

And when it all comes down
You’ll never stand alone

Everything

It is link to preserve my next track 'The Madness in Your Space': show.co/pR5TKDJSpotify

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Before I made the music (beat), then I found that it can be nice mix with acapella of the tack. But after acapella I made some changes with the music.

The music is slightly changed for the parts:
1) intro
2) Skepta verse
3) Hook
4) Pop Smoke verse 1
5) Pop smoke verse 2

Links to original track:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=usu0XY4QNB0&ab_channel=POPSMOKE

Note: it is not something like parody, I just like music has contrast between lyrics and music like Gorillaz etc.

I hope you enjoy)

Pop Smoke - Welcome To The Party Feat Skepta prod by The Double Morphis

Imagine a night full of wonders, dreams and hopes. This is the track for it.

A Night to Remember

falling from a lime tree
another heart-shaped leaf
summer's all behind me
autumn is a slow thief

you were set on a goal
an obsession you hold
you were ready to go to war
your possessions were sold
you could probably sell some more

it feels cold, the waiting
it feels cold, the waiting
it feels cold, the waiting
are you feeling the cold wind too?
or is somebody warming you?

you sentenced me to three
months of loneliness
you made it clear that i've been
the cause of all this stress

when i came up to you
as the summer wind blew
on a thursday up in crewe
i was falling for you
but in my heart i knew

it feels cold, the waiting
it feels cold, the waiting
it feels cold
are you feeling the cold wind too?
it feels cold
it feels cold
it feels cold, the waiting
it feels cold
but it's warmer than yesterday
i believe the wind changed today

The Waiting (remaster)

Leave it with me, and we'll see.
What we find without.
What the talks about.
What they've left around.
What goes round and round.

Leave it with me, and we'll see.
What we're dealing out.
What we worked around.
What it's all about.
Why we're talking loud.

The spark that glows can be restored.
The spark is fed, the fire roars.

Just let it be, and we'll see.
What the chats about.
What they're hawking out.
Where the feelings gone.
Where we're going wrong.

Just let it be, and we'll see.
What they're paying on.
What's the chance they're gone.
What's the right and wrong.
Whether it's begun.

The spark lights up the window pane.
Only the blackened charred remains.
The spark that glows can be restored.
The spark is fed, the fire roars.

What the life's about.
spinning lies around.
What this loves about.
What lies round about. 

What is going on.
Where it all went wrong.
Why the fuss began.
When the rabbit rabbit ran.

The spark lights up the feilds again.
Showing only charred remains.
The spark that glows can be restored.
The spark is fed, the fire roars.

Leave it with me, and we'll see.
When it's coming back.
A surprise attack.
What or not, the craic.
That we sorely lack.

Leave it to me, and we'll see.
What the chats about.
What they're hawking out.
Where the feelings gone.
Where we're going wrong.


Spark

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Lyrics:

NoahUI:

Somethings inside my head are just things you wont understand 
Somethings inside my head also take me away from the promise land 
I fall down and I get back up cause I
Got a dream that lays inside my mind 
Been through a lot you can see it in my eyes 
But I'm still gon make the sacrifice 

Ghxstty: 

In my head (Whoa)
There’s things that u will never see
In my head (Whoa)
Found out I’m my own enemy
Oh, no matter how much I fight
I’m still losing deep inside
I'd rather simply just die
But I will win this time
In my head (Whoa)
There’s things that u will never see

NoahUI:

I've been really down there in the dirt (dirt, really)
Really became one with the earth (earth, I'm)
I'm hurtin tryna find my worth but the devil lurks tryna find a way to converse  (way, way, converse, I'm)
I'm lookin at the face of a beast  (beast, a)
A beast that keeps on chasin me  (keeps on chasin me, I'm)
I'm runnin but I dont really got much speed  (much speed)
So really this way I cant suceed  (this way, suceed)
So I must face this in my own way  (own way)
Like a mad man inna road rage  (mad man, inna road rage)
Pull the glock out pray to God im gon spray (pull the glock, gon spray)
Might be a spirit but i feel it in my home mane  (home mane)
He keeps tauntin me he keeps hauntin me (he keeps tauntin me he keeps hauntin me)
But now I realize hes only in my thoughts you see (yeah)
Now I know the way to win and to put this to an end 
Is to beat em in my head I gotta beat em in my (gotta beat em gotta beat em in)

Ghxstty:

In my head (Whoa)
There’s things that u will never see
In my head (Whoa)
Found out I’m my own enemy
Oh, no matter how much I fight
I’m still losing deep inside
I'd rather simply just die
But I will win this time
In my head (Whoa)
There’s things that u will never see

Whoa
Whoa (ah)

@teamhalo

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This week's track is from an upcoming release, Emu Mosic.

Please visit SincereLogic.com for complete catalogue.

-Written and Performed by Sincere Logic and Stellar
 -Beat by the living legend Sleepy Fish (check them out at https://open.spotify.com/artist/1IJe80moz409PtxW4llPFw?)
 -Mixed and Mastered by Proposition Productions

Emu Mosic

Begin Again (Featuring Stellar of Whiskey&Water)

Smoking Thrax (freestyle)

Giannis (Freestyle) (prod.waale)

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Listen and enjoy! This will help you in your spiritual path!

Echoes From The Past

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single muy corto de 1:20min instrumentos varias guitarras, bajo, piano electrico, bateria vst, sample de cerdo, una mescla musical de rock blues, glam metal, rock alternativo.
grabado el 28/02/2021

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Hi! I'm a Singer-Songwriter, Guitarist and Producer from Oxford, England. My influences are Rock, Folk, Jazz, Funk, Blues as well as Electronic Dance Music. I collaborate with other musicians and also work on solo projects.

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