Dizzy eight rap contest entry (youtube)

beat is made by me im only 14 and im open to any advice im pretty new to the rap game lol. If you like it please follow.
my insta is @luckysir_beats hit me up if you want a beat haha
lyrics:
 Luckysir at your service dont forget the name cause i am making the heat ayy
and Im Droping bars not stopping till i hear my  songs on repeat 
On my grind now cause im dropping all this heat 
Wait till hear my name topping charts with all these bars and beats 

Ready for fame to come my name
Dont you test me I aint ask grade 
Keeping on trying to keep me underchains
I dont care cause making way 
To the top
Where Im going up 
In the Music game 
Cause im playing with top dogs 
Bark Bark but you got no bite 
So stop  trying to play mindgames
You aint gonna change me 
You aint gonna break me
Cause im Gonna achieve 
What you couldn believe yeah 
You want the beef 
Thats all you can eat 
But got pay with blueface 
Like about 3 
But thats 2 piece no sauce
Dont worry I give you  some sauce  
Produce all this heat on the repeat 
Like im playing this loop repeat yeah 
But you never cause catching slacking 
Cause im send you out packing 

 Luckysir at your service dont forget the name cause i am making the heat ayy
and Im Droping bars not stopping till i hear my  songs on repeat 
On my grind now cause im dropping all this heat 
Wait till hear my name topping charts with all these bars and beats