Here is a new demo from a new song I wrote - any thoughts?

Let Sink

As an aspiring artist and music producer, I just want to thank the songwriter and those hosting this event, from the bottom of my heart - 
You have motivated me to try and actually put something out there again, even if I still don't really know what I am doing, this journey has unexpectedly brought my family closer together and I just want to say thank you for supporting all independent artists and their families! 

Honestly I just went with wherever the music took me, and just added my 4 signature instruments: 8-string guitar/ 6-string guitar/ drums/ synth! 

Good luck to all the participants! And, if anyone wants to chat more about anything- by day I am a full-time voice actor, and by night I am working on my drum chops and production skills, with an emphasis on family, art, and coffee. 

Peace!  
-Aaron

Lunar Fifth Studios