Damn, that groove pulls me in right off the bat!

really like that melodic rhythm on 2/4 of the verse

great use of the prompt. really dug the vibe of this one all the way through. Super smooth.  Nice work.

the production on this one sounds fantastic! the reggae rock vibe is like a heavy Police sounds and the vocals and lyrics are killer..love the whoah oh oh

Police! Yeah and talking about prisoners too :-) Love the call and response of the verse and the way it gets simultaneously funky and heavy on the chorus. Cool tune!

Unrealized Regrets
Music and Words by Mark Magram (2023)

No one leaves alive
There's only one way out of here
Sentenced to survive
An unintended prisoner

(ch)
Whoah oh oh
If you're among the lucky ones
Who hasn't left the planet yet
Whoah oh oh
You'll leave behind a mountain of
Unrealized regrets

Through your newborn eyes
You're thrown into reality
Never given any choice
Through your newborn cries
You're only given sympathy
You were born without a voice

(ch)
(solo)

(ch x 2)

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