A great melody in the verses - really love the repetition in the lyric too. The pre-chorus really sets up the chorus and 'Panic attack' is the last line I was expecting! Super!

Cool song man!! Love the title. Really great lyrics, the song has a great build up to that catchy chorus, the monkey on the back line is fantastic, you sound awesome, Nicely done!!

You had me hooked in an instant, Mark. I love that chorus!

Great lyrics, vocal and guitar! Reaching high on the catchy chorus!

Verse 1
Wake up silly dreamer, where do you go
Wake up silly dreamer, what do you know
Wake up silly dreamer, you’re moving slow
Wake up silly dreamer, it’s time to go

Pre-Chorus
Open up your blurry eyes
The time is slipping by
The truth you keep is locked inside
The things you try to hide

Chorus
Panic attack
It’s just the same old monkey on your back
We fall off track
But everything we need is pointing back

Verse 2
Wake up silly dreamer, what do you think
Wake up silly dreamer, you’re on the brink
Wake up silly dreamer, dust off your boots
Wake up silly dreamer, back to your roots

Pre-Chorus
Don’t get lost in all the noise
It’s gonna drag you down
Don’t forget you have a choice
Rise up or hit the ground

Chorus
Panic attack
It’s just the same old monkey on your back
We fall off track
But everything we need is pointing back

Panic attack
It’s just the same old monkey on your back
We fall off track
But everything we need is pointing back

Outro
Wake up silly dreamer, it’s time to go

Wake Up Silly Dreamer

Just an ordinary knucklehead strumming my six-string and singing songs. I labor with sweat and tears to make REAL music for REAL people, because I refuse to let AI take that away from us.

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