I really like the melody of this line - 'I can never run to you'

What a gem that I didn't know about. Great track :-)

This is a song I wrote 10 ys ago (just like 'FATE!' (https://soundcloud.com/martimedia/fate)) and I had so much fun re-recording it! The incredible guitar solo is provided by the KING (@bad-jeans-1). 

This song is about not being able to be where you want to be at a given time. Did you like the track? Click the 'repost' button!

Unreachable

I just will never stop explaining
And I know I can be hard to understand
But when everybody looks..
..Like I'm talking Chinese 
I'm dying for you to have a seat

I know I'll never stop complaining  
Cause the world can be a jail when you try to live  
But when everybody hides.. 
.. in their own world of lies 
You will always stay.. You will always stay..  

I look at you and I see a child
Fighting tears with both eyes
Sometimes I'm out of words
But you don't need a single one to read me
With the speed of reflections of light

I just will never stop wondering, 
Why nobody sees me like the way you do, 
I don't want to be the same.. 
.. but why would anybody care  
You're the only one who isn't sleeping.. 
 
You stare at me and when you try to reach, 
I feel your tears in my heart, 
I can never run to you, 
but you are everywhere around, 
For me to speak without..  
..using words 

You're so unreachable, you travel with the speed of light, 
And when I reach out for your hand, the mirror will break... 
I'm so unreachable, I'm just too many planets away, 
And when you reach out for my hand, the mirror will break... 

Thanks to the songwriters-in-the-kitchen forum (http://www.songwriter-forum-kitchen.com/)  for reviewing and providing feedback! 

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Unreachable

Creating/playing/composing/arranging music has been my passion since I was born ;-) I love singing (in harmonies as well), play a bit on the guitar, drum a little and play some keys. I've been active in the local (dutch) pop/rock cover scene in bands as a lead singer and rhythm-guitar player. Now I record my work (and covers) on my attic studio at home.

I'd appreciate when you let me know what you think/feel when listening to my tracks. Your feedback can help me to improve; and that, hopefully will please you as music lovers! Of course, I especially love to hear what you 'liked' about my songs, because that gives me pointers about what 'works' for you and helps me to move forward in the development of my own style ;-) .  But don't be shy and provide me with things that don't work for you as well, for the exact same reason :-)

If you listened to my work/left comments or feedback/reposted my tracks: thank you!  And I'll be happy to visit your work as well and leave a like, repost and comment.

Cheerz, Love and Peace, 
Mar T.

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