I like this breakdown. If it came a bit earlier it might even work better to add variety to the track.

Your bassdrum tuned so high, more like low tom. It feels even higher than snare fundamental. Sometimes it makes clashing with the bass notes.

That almost audio rate arp and S&H sequence gives an 8-bit flavor to it. Perhaps you should make everything sound in chiptune manner.

Yeah, some nice ideas in sound. I think you should try then again in further.

*Very* cool sounds. I really like your work here, but the dominant tom/kick is wearing on the patience a bit.

You need to "glue" instruments together. Now it kind of sounds like every instrumnet have his own room settings. Especially that kick wich really stick out - too dry for the rest of track.

I feel there is a good core, interesting sounds and atmosphere, but for me the kick is far too dominant and it kinds of stops me enjoying the rest as much as i would otherwise!

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