this actually good, just need to turn your vocals up a bit, other than that oddwin prolly actually like this

This is masterful work with the pen, man. Gifted storytelling abilities, that’s what you got.

LYRICS:
Feel like Makoto with these times I’m tryna leap through
My rear view full of promises I ain’t see to
I’m late on rent, the third month straight, I’m tryna keep cool
Wanted to end it, but that’s no option when they need you
With a mom that’s still dreaming ‘bout retired life
Big bro stuck in a situation he’s tryna fight
Both sisters trying to make it through all the strife, the type
Of shit that make me cry at night, I’m tryna provide a light
While trauma coming back, I’m struggling within
This SSX, it’s Tricky tryna Master comfort in my skin
Just being transparent, I was a kid lost in fitting in
Was caving in on myself till I found solace in a pen
Was falling back with my grades, dad & mom split, I was 8
Thought that I was to blame, Toonami was my escape
I blinked, and now I’m 24, tryna deflect the blows
You see the everyday struggles, I see Tekken 4
I’m up 7-0, even my enemies proud
Think Uncle Ruckus, they knew I was that nigga deep down
Know some locals fronting on me while knowing this shit godly
That thought get stepped on like Nezuko did Daki
Same niggas beefing with me while they got the women truly scared
Type that make ‘em wanna choose the bear, you niggas make me sick
Think I’m in your spot and you don’t know what to make of it
Miguel O’Hara type shit, you must hate the kid
Sick of the canon events, I been through enough
But even then I couldn’t fathom giving it up
The quiet kid’s metamorphosis, look what I became
All from writing, packaging & giving my struggle a name
I feel like Naruto standing in the village remains
Crowd switching, cheering while I just got rid of the Pain
Finally got a bit of this fame, but I guess my feelings done changed
Cause somehow it just isn’t the same

The Boy Who Leapt Through Time (Oddwin Rap Contest 2024)

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