Well first off, I really struggled with this composition this week and I think I just got blocked creatively. This little composition has been on my head for a while now but I just really had a hard time writing it down. I am hoping that this coming week and can loosen up a little more and finally be able to translate what I have on my mind on to paper. Thank You.

Is this composition too obvious?

Does it sound familiar to you?

Struggle

Description of Changes

The first thing I started changing around in my composition was adding or changing a lot of the rhythm of the notes. The first one I made just seemed way too simple so I decided to add more notes to keep up with the “struggle”. To do this I played a little more with the accompaniment and with the bass line. I also added more notes in the melody section at certain parts. 

Another thing I did was to add the much needed dynamics including crescendos and decrescendos.

It is still the same composition in essence just added more things to make it sound more full and hopefully better.


misaelroco