Just a little song I'm working on. Obviously, it's not complete, but good critiques are welcomed. If you like it, let me know. If not, let me know why not. Im trying to be as close to perfect as I can with every note, sound, song I make so it helps a lot to get feedback. Positive or negative, let me hear it. I'd appreciate it. By the way, this beat isn't mine. It was made by MechanicalReaction. Check it out here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DjKsUuds3iU. Enjoy :)

Blowin' Up (Mizzing Lynk) Jhene Aiko Sailing Not Selling Instrumental

Lol funny lil freestyle I made about ratchet chicks. Obviously i talk about money because it's a over the about the money instrumental by TI. Shout outs to him and the maker of this instrumental. Hope you like it. If not, oh well, it only took 25 min and i did it for fun. Thanks. any comments, good or bad, post'em I like feedback in every form.

No More Ratchets

quick make
not a rapper
feedback please (professional or non)
enjoy