Not bad man. I enjoy the electric-y wobbles you've put together.

I have been listening to this nonstop for the past 2 days.
Didn't know there was any room, but this just hit my top 10.
I've been a house head since Daft Punk's "Homework" dropped in 1997 and have been listening and hating half of the electronic music I've heard since, lol. Well, mainly criticizing as awful to my ears.  (the other half has been a pleasure to hear)

But here's my "heart is bleeding for this song" critique: 

The progression is wonderful, the hits and rhythm changes (4 on the floor w/ snare during the chorus) keeps it fresh.
The vocals sit just right without any distraction (good mixing).
The synthesizer melody fills in for the slower (half-time) rhythm. I like how it's glitchy without being off or busy.
The bridge changes and breaks down to make the joy of the song feel... melancholy. It redefines the song.
The ending is like a great 90's Techno/Trance tune which makes you hit replay. Well, it makes me do that.
Mastering or mixing again to make the sub/kick and snare actually have that punch they deserve, separated from the rest.
--I don't know, I've been listening to it in my car, where I've listened to countless of songs (it's my greatest base test to see if a song is mixed right).

The highest of Hooves! /)

P.S. 
your face is beautiful, Sr. Crackles. XD

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