To give myself some context, had a listen to Mark's original and love what you've done with the track here, the addition of vocals being such a brilliant innovation...

nice work.  i've just recently become familiar with this artist... i have that song keys on a mix and it always catches my attention each time it hits.

Poop - C major - 116 bpm
Original song written by - Modes About Me 
https://soundcloud.com/modesaboutme
Music/lyrics: Composed, written and performed by Mark David McClellan
Remix/Interpretation by - (MZRPKLPS)
(https://soundcloud.com/mzrpklps )
Lyrics:
Berry lemonade on a summers day
Parade around the town in your chains like a slave
Oh you think you are brave
You're not
You're a disgrace
Get away from
Sheesh
Do I smoke leaf
Pass her down
Pass her on down
Pass her all around until the wheels fall off
I fell off
I think my wheels fell off
Fell off

Modes About Me - Poop - Open Collab [MZRPKLPS Wheels Fell Off R3|V|1X

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95% of my followers never gave me a single like, repost or comment on my tracks. don't be that guy. 😂🙄 if you send me your track unsolicited, get blocked and reported for spam. does not apply to real supporters.
Loop Diggers Crew. highly caffeinated and looking for open collabs! i make music to (try to) keep from going crazy! 
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