This beat pretty good, this lyrics is bouncing

I'm really digging this.  Feels he vocals could be a little cleaner.  seem a little muddy.  but you got skill.  keep it up

Like the lyrics and flow in this song dog 🔥

I like the beat fr , its hella fye AND HOLY SHIT i just realized this was an general iroh rip song

Man bro your production choice is crazy. And the lyrics are dope too bro. Fucking fire my g. ✊️💯 keep creating bro thanks for sending me your sounds.

@user-488787763: hell yeah brotha avatar is forever goated

a tribute to an old friend, rest easy soldier

Intro:
I been trapped inside my mind, yeah

Hook:
Trapped inside my mind
Corrupting my soul
Like fragile tiny shells
Shivering in the cold
Little soldier boy
Come marching home
Brave soldier boy
Come marching home

Verse 1:
Wasn’t there from the start
Thumping head, broken heart
Theorizing why the horizon is always rising
Fantasizing as I lie dying, you think I’m quiet? 
No fucking lie imma lion, my life is slightly more private
I buy a flight go right to my island meet with the shaman
The type to do as he promised, not tell you just what you wanting
Hate being honest, but I’ll be flawless regardless
Scripting my sonnet, a comets come right to earth, from beyond us
I’ll never get to see you again
I can’t believe it I’m seizing this really mean it’s the end
Had a good season I mean it
You preaching and I’m seeing how I'll bring the peace with this pen
Feel like I lost an old friend
This world is costing my men
It happens often, a coffin has taken place of a bed
I’m racing grazing my head
Can’t fucking take it I bet, I will not make it ‘cause Satan’s been fucking hating again

Hook:
Trapped inside my mind
Corrupting my soul
Like fragile tiny shells
Shivering in the cold
Little soldier boy
Come marching home
Brave soldier boy
Come marching home

Verse 2:
I didn’t try to hurt her feelings, I didn’t mean it
Shits come between us, I’m bleeding
But she can’t see it, she fiending
Yeah
And she won’t even believe
Ain’t even got a good reason
She pleading stop with the treason
I’m getting mad and I mean it
Just need a dab of some refer
I like ‘em bad so I keep her
Yet what we had was just meaningless
Compare it to that of counterfeit
The whole bitch is irrelevant
They getting caught in my emissions
Cant see the vision, aim and they missing
Ain't got a bitch who I’m sticking with, through the thick of it
When I get in predicaments
I just serve ‘em the catalyst
For the earth I’m an activist
I got herb you got actavis
Help me out while I’m practicing
I’m actively acting to make shit happen I’m mastering
Starting to feel immaculate
Grab the reins as I crack the whip
Ain't about no damn pedestal
Just doin what I’m sent to do

Hook:
Trapped inside my mind
Corrupting my soul
Like fragile tiny shells
Shivering in the cold
Little soldier boy
Come marching home
Brave soldier boy
Come marching home

*see you on the other side*

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