After some great feedback and tweaking, it's done. I added the drum track from the first few bars to some of the rest of the track, reduced some of the effects, and (last but not least) faded out. Thanks to 'damien6' from Reddit for the tips and the rest of /r/electronicmusic for their time and feedback.

Ethereal Tension

Fixed a few minor errors and added a third synthesizer playing in both the left and right speakers to balance out the first two.

Eight Wonders

My first track done entirely without drum loops or loops of any kind.

Resolute/Abandon

New track inspired by Bryan Ferry's 'Warrior's of the Apocalypse' sculptures.

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