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Everyday since i was born 
was gray and long
and long and gray
hear what i say

Nothing went right for me
fear and failure
and failure and fear
i hope that you hear - me

you crashed into me
after all those lonely days
on this foolish fucking world
i crasched into you
after all this lonely years
on this foolish fucking world

Everyday i bore my way
high and low
and low and high
i have to cry

Nothing came easily
fight and loose
and loose and fight
is this right

you crashed into me
after all those lonely days
on this foolish fucking world
i crasched into you
after all this lonely years
on this foolish fucking world

Since I was born

It’s Been a Hell of a Day 

Verse 1:
I saw her in the subway, she was waiting for the train, carrying no umbrella and she was dripping from the rain.  

She had a broken heel, and I could smell her broken heart.  

She limped from within like everything in life had gotten too hard.  

She must have spilled her coffee, she was bitching bout a stain.

It’s when she started laughing, I knew the tears weren’t far away


Chorus 
That’s when she said, it’s been a hell of a day, and even though I’m broke, I got the pain at the edge of a smile, sure feels better than the joke.  You can run out of luck and still have hope, no you can’t let it keep you down


Verse 2:
She turned to me and shrugged, wiped a black tear from her cheek, her bottom lip started trembling and she was shaking in her knees.   

She lit a cigarette and here come the police, she took a drag and flicked it at the track and the policeman let her be.  

Sat down on a bench and tossed a quarter to a bum, and she said pay no mind to this soul of mine because I ain’t got it bad as some


Chorus 2:
It’s been a hell of a day and you might want to die; you’ve been bit by the dog and someone spit in your eye, may be feeling cold and bitter, want to lay on the track, and kiss all your sorrows goodbye.


Chorus 3:
It’s been a hell of a day, and even if you’re broke, just pick up a stick, grunt, and give life a poke.  You can run out of luck and still have hope, no you can’t let it keep you down.


Chorus 4:
It’s been a hell of a day, well how you like that shit, she stood back up man and blew me a kiss.  Then she walked on past that yellow line and left all her troubles behind

La dee da dee da …

One Hell of a Day

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Letra y música por Wladimir Martínez.

Aquí  Ahora y Siempre

Aquí, Ahora y Siempre

L&M: RIR

Did you know that if you look back you can turn into salt?

I refused to walk towards salvation, at that time it was possible to do something wise, but my ego looked back, and decided to ignore my other side of my heart.

I thought it was a good idea to make a song, dedicated to someone who left ages before, it was brainy, but the truth is that I attempted to cover all the pain and suffering, by looking back and I became a statue of salt.

Anyway she was my first great teacher and I had a farewell and at least she gave me the opportunity to say goodbye in a very civilized way, I wished her all the best in her life and I never saw her again.

Thank you teacher MBIC!

Gualumbos

TIENI ALTO IL LOVE

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