This is my first finished song without lyrics!!! please feel free to give critizim

Cincinnati Sunset Song- ObiWanJacoby

Bubbles

I would like to introduce the face of my brand, ObiWanJacoby! ObiWanJacoby is more than just a logo/Brand. ObiWanJacoby is a vibe! A FORCE to be reckoned with! His music Teeters on the battle between Good and Evil. His Purple Saber is a representation of his balance between the two. Sometimes he his called to fight on opposing sides. But with a purpose to bring people together for a common cause! Follow this Jedi on his quest to win the hearts and likes of the world! #IamObiWanJacoby