First cypher. First time recording. Feedback and constructive criticism wanted and needed.


Its the fact that I'm better than you
Its the fact that my drive makes me a better competitor dude.
It's the fact that i got something to prove
And since it's my first cypher
I got nothing to lose
Acting like a rapper when I'm off of the booze
Performing in front of the mirror when I wake from a snooze
In back of the class writing lyrics as I let my pen loose
Making up adventures pretending I'm a part Scooby doo
Brain scattered but this keeps me concentrated
Depressed thoughts but this stops discombobulation
If this pen rots my thoughts begin their deflation
I'm the top spot if peeps pop to the sound of my creations

MHH Cypher VOl. 26

Take 2. Hopefully it's louder this time around.

Its the fact that I'm better than you
Its the fact that my drive makes me a better competitor dude.
It's the fact that i got something to prove
And since it's my first cypher
I got nothing to lose
Acting like a rapper when I'm off of the booze
Performing in front of the mirror when I wake from a snooze
In back of the class writing lyrics as I let my pen loose
Making up adventures pretending I'm a part Scooby doo
Brain scattered but this keeps me concentrated
Depressed thoughts but this stops discombobulation
If this pen rots my thoughts begin their deflation
I'm the top spot if peeps pop to the sound of my creations

Take 2 Vol 26

For the people who told me to slow down
I didn't hear you
I'm way too far up in the clouds
For me to fear you
For my family and friends who wanted another listen
I thank you for keeping my heart pumping out these good emissions
To the enemies who gave me their energy and challenged me
You've probably been the best for me and made me the oddity
And I'm sorry momma I didn't realize my talent when I was young
But I gotta tell you I finally found something I find so fun
And I will never find any fun in being normal
I thank you dad for those words that will always be immortal

MHH 28

(FINALLY FIGURED IT OUT. Anyways enjoy and give criticism and feedback. Much appreciated.)

I don't care if you like me or not
Cuz youll be bumpin me through these speakers whether you it or not
Son of Ali so I fight til I drop
Human torch on the mic I ignite on the spot

I'm 6'8"
I'm already shoulders and a head of you people
eye to eye with the skyline
I'm looking down on your steeple
got a head start to the top
and you bitch that's illegal
I come through all cylinders hot
my heart is pumping pure diesel

I'd hazard to guess
That you're a faggot at best
If you step to me You best believe
I'll put an axe through your chest
Yes it's real I am odd
I do my spiel and they nod
I stand above them all
And without a single thought
They will kneel before zod

And best believe I got that Colorado bravado
When I hit you with the right hook
The whole venue will start to wobble
You may think your big time, a gangsta, a desperado
But I'm the one sitting pretty like my second home is el Dorado

Odi-T