I will now analyze this poem:   "Oh my dog"  This line is perfect in its simplicity. It establishes the subject of the poem, and builds anticipation for the next line, as well as mystery: who is his dog?   "Oh Long John"   Finally, we get the payoff. The name of his dog, is "Long John."  "Oh Long Johnson"  A subversion! In a truly brilliant twist, we discover that the subject of the poem isn't Long John himself, but rather the son of Long John.  "Oh Don Piano"  We receive more information about Long John's son. His name is "Don Piano." I'd also like to point out that the poem uses the subtle but masterful  technique of beginning each new with "Oh" which serves to connect each line, completing the stanza.

"Why I eyes ya?"   The first line that doesn't begin with "Oh," the sudden shift in the rhyme scheme grabs your attention, and let's you know that this line is of  particular importance. The author seems to find Don Piano to be ab object of fascination, and doesn't know why.   "All the live long day"  The next line confirms how deep the author's fascination with Don Piano truly is, bordering perhaps on infatuation. Could this be a love poem?  The subtlety and complexity of this line leaves it up to interpretation.    "Oh Long John's day"  Returning to the poetic device of beginning each line with "Oh," bringing the poem full circle. We return to the subject of the author's dog,  Long John, the father of Don Piano. Once again, there's mystery: what is Long John's day? Could it be a happy occasion, such as a birthday?  Or, a sad occasion, such as a funeral? This mystery is never resolved, leaving the poem on a bittersweet note.

"Oh that long long Johnson"  The final line is interesting. On a superficial level, the repetition of "Long Johnson" after the line about "Long John" is merely filler,  to bookend the poem, ending it as it began. I believe it goes deeper than that. As discussed previously, this can certainly be interpreted  as a love poem between the author and Long John's Son, Don Piano, meaning this line could very well be a clever double entendre.

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