I need your opinion for this melody i've made ...to finish my track ! 

Made a melody ! Need your opinion !

I did a melody ...and need some opinions if this one is good...for  a full track :) 

Melody #2 Need your opinion ! Tell me :)

Melody #5 ! BEST PERFORMANCE !

Melody #6 FUCK YEAH !

Melody #7

Hey guys im an 15 years EDM producer ! And this is my first track , i did it not to promote me , but to see what i learned in July and August :) So rate it fair ! Thanks !

Oliscan Yura