Not really a singer but r/songwriterscircle require some soundcloud account so I just threw this ugly ass voice out for the lyrics I composed:

https://medium.com/@foolness/unapproved-r-songwriterscircle-post-on-my-way-to-loving-you-without-you-needing-to-know-that-i-abdabf0f5af8#.7fiy4ojfy



Pop Shit ver. of On My Way to Loving You Without You Needing to Know that I still Want You

2nd upload, not sure if this count as folk or just shitty low tune voice but once again, I just need the soundcloud for r/songwriterscircle submission

Folk Shit ver. of On My Way to Loving You Without You Needing to Know that I still Want You

Personally this sounds the worst but ahh what the heck...

Rock ver. of On My Way to Loving You Without You Needing to Know that I still Want You

(Sadly the listenable version to this is mellow but I can't reach the note to make it not hurt the ears)

Credit goes to the Filipino ex-music student now nutritionist student Alvin Martinez for making these lyrics work (hopefully he does a youtube or soundcloud of this to show how this translates into a song)
*some parts taken from On My Own from Les Miserables
So now it’s time to go on my lonesome yet again.
No one to turn to!
Just my feet making me go forward past my own darkness.
Without a home
Without a friend
Without the resume to say a personal hello to you again.
Pre-Chorus:
On my own, pretending I could be the chorus to your soul.
All alone, I walk with your evaporating visage
Till the lights prove
It’s all truly just a mirage
Chorus:
So Thank YOU!
Thank you!
For telling me the rain won’t wash away the broken pieces of memories we shared.
So Thank You…
Thank you for showing me the candlelight that would illuminate my trauma away.
Body #2:
And now the twilight of my age has dawned.
And now I must finally stop playing make believe with my own love no more.
This time, I can finally walk alone:
With barely any repressions…left behind!
Repeat Chorus
Refrain:
Here’s to making wrong love cure repression away
Here’s to hoping to turn to ash but letting your soul glimmer my sadness away
Repeat Chorus
Body #3:
You are the only thing left inside to reject
I’ve set thelimit to your previous limitless beautiful subject
Repeat Chorus
Body #4:
Finally please don’t quote on me saying this but,
Thank you!
Thanks for helping me lay better my love to rest.
Thanks for knowing truthfully that what I felt was not just a test.
Finally, goodbye to you my sweet unrest.

Bad Version of Rerouting Love While Ending the Visage that Has Saved Me Time and Time Again

This is actually a crappier version with even worse meters but I got feedback that:

"Regardless, none of the detail you just explained to me (about the psych ward) comes through in the lyrics. I can't tell if it's because the language is distracting or because it's too ambiguous. I don't think ambiguity is a bad thing in some cases, but you seem to want a certain level of detail that I am not seeing here"

so I am uploading the original with tons of mistakes.

Paul Keith