very nice peter, love everything about this track.

Another modern poetic work. Love the cool synth, bass melodies mixed in with poetry. Good Job!!

Kind of funky, punchy groove and your trademark vocals, excellent!

Might I am not doing an exact analyzing as others.

I was only dreaming
My smile had just begun
Gazing out at everything
Amazed by bubble-gum.

I was only dreaming
I was not that long past ten
Left the cult for other things
Became a better man.

I was only dreaming
Life was good to me
Entered every doorway
The ones that I could see.

I was only dreaming
I was fit and very young
Swinging out across the rafters
Brought the whole house down.

I was only dreaming
The years becoming mean
With sorrow and joy
And much else inbetween.

I was only dreaming
Lost in a dark mirage
The movie spooled for many hours
A madman was in charge.

The parade went on and on
The tanks and all those men
Marching past the podium
I was the best of them.

I was only dreaming
The bad days went away
Sorrow folded up its tent
The sun came out to play.

I was only dreaming
The times were really swell
The work of life was flourishing
The dance going so well.

And in all my dreaming
The road still lay ahead
Sailing off into the night
And rumbling up the stairs.

Dreaming R5

Writer of prose and poetry since mid-1960s. Given an acoustic guitar in 1978 by long-suffering sister. Many songs produced that way. More recently, guitar skills all but faded, using GarageBand and Logic Pro to put words to music.
ps. The Bandcamp songs should be free to download. Please let me know if they're not.

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